Friday, May 4, 2018

My finished metaphor poem

A couple of weeks ago we posted a draft of metaphor poem.
We had to improve our writing and add more description.
We were learning to use language features appropriately showing a developing understanding of effect.
I did well on improving my metaphor poem but what could make it better is by adding a bit more detail.
I hope you enjoy reading my poem!

Taleisha is...

Taleisha is candyfloss, ideas sticking in her mind.

Taleisha is a pencil case, full of knowledge and thoughts.

Taleisha is a Kauri tree, protecting the little Kowhai trees

Taleisha is a bewildered emoji, curious to learn new things

Taleisha is a toasted sandwich, that is warm and inviting

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