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Tuesday, March 27, 2018

My draft metaphor poem

Yesterday in Te Ngahere we have been writing poems about ourselves.
We have been learning to use metaphors
and add a little bit of an explanation.
I enjoyed learning about metaphors. I think I need to work on describing
about myself with metaphors. This is my first draft.


Taleisha is...

Taleisha is candyfloss, sweet and soft.

Taleisha is the colour light blue, vibrant and unique.

Taleisha is a Kauri tree, protective and bold.

Taleisha is a dress, flowy and beautiful.
Taleisha is a toasted sandwich, warm and inviting.




1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Taleisha,
    It’s Saff. I really like metaphor poem. The way you compare yourself to cotton candy and light blue is so cool. All your metaphors are different and unique. Good job Taleisha, I am looking forward to your extended poem.
    Thanks for posting,

    Saff

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