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Friday, February 17, 2017

My amazing summer writing

Tuesday 7th February.Image result for summer tumblr

I Remember…
Splashing in the icy cool turquoise water.
My family all playing and having fun in the ocean flocking around.
I was walking around listening to the waves speaking in a wavy language
Getting splashed by the salty water.
I wandered and stared into the sky watching the seagulls playfully swimming in the sea. I lay on the soft sand that comforted me.
I was grateful that the cooling sea came and splashed me.
That was my summer

In Te Ngahere we had to write a descriptive piece of writing. The start of a descriptive writing piece is what you were doing, then something that was happening, then something you did, why you did it and then finish with that was summer or something similar.  
I think that I went well with understanding the structure and was able to know what to do. I think I need to work on adding more descriptive words in my story.




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